The Dragon's Curse {Hiatus}
The Dragon's Curse is a fantasy interactive fiction based on asian mythology mostly, but mixing others. Can you find out what are the others?
There is a belief that there are always second chances.
That there is always a path of virtue for those who seek it.
You are the General, the hero of Yamato, one of the largest countries in Astrõs, until you are cursed.
For a thousand souls your sword has snatched, a thousand scales will be awarded to you.
For each new soul in scarlet scale will become. Be careful, because if the last one does not hold; death is what awaits you.
Romances
Fhlan [She]
The bright and mature of the twins. She is the calmer of the two twins, but don't be confused. She can be just as energetic; however the mature side of her keeps her at bay.
You can rely on her survival instincts as well as her strong personality against the odds.
Fhlaon [He]
Mature from outside, child from inside.
He likes to go to his own free will, and has his ways with daggers and people. Don't like to much been pushed around.
Just like his sister, he loves his people.
Ayu [He/They/She]
A mysterious beauty that you meet along the way.
As beautiful as kind, seems to share a bond with you. They don't seem to have evil intentions, but sometimes they seem scared to break you?
Hsajan [They]
Sometimes I prefer silence in suffering.
Credits
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Development log
- Hiatus for now... Everything lost.Jul 21, 2023
- What happen...Jan 31, 2023
- Dev Log [18_10_22]Oct 18, 2022
- Grammar Error Fix (Update) + Fhlaon WIPSep 10, 2022
- Grammar Errors Fix (Soon)Sep 07, 2022
- Publishing and other things...Aug 29, 2022
Comments
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Darn, quite short, but I really see this going somewhere, but for now, its short and sweet, and I shall wait until it be complete.
there are a few errors in grammar, the first being on the prologue page. the third sentence isn't incorrect, just odd to read. "gold is the meaning of which house they are from" also is a bit off, maybe change it to something like "the gold signifies their house" or "the gold shows where they are from." the options to choose hair length and color are also off, mostly with "bald scalp" "braid" and maybe "mohawk." i'd suggest changing these to "lack of" "braided" and something like "mohawked" "spiked" or even just "styled" hair. this might be an error on my part, but i'm not sure what you mean by "lick-ing"? maybe "liking"? this is on the same page as the hair options. you should also change "go" to "going", and on the next page (if you choose the laughter option) you say "his brother" when i think you mean either "her brother" or "his sister." remove the comma in "living with them for a short time,".
otherwise, the colors look great and i love the story so far! keep up the great work :)
I will try to change it immediately.
But about the joke, yes, it's intentional. Licking and liking sounds just, a little, alike, so he is making a mistake with his tongue when he's saying the name of the town {and a dirty joke, that too}, that's why he is using licking. It's a bad joke, I know, but that's the way he is.
Thanks for the comment, AND, of course, for your words of encouragement.Have a nice day.
It really seems interesting although the grammatical errors made it hard to read but other than that it's great
Thanks you so much!
Then I have to correct that. I it's not much trouble. Can you point me where I make mistakes?
And sorry for hurt your eyes with my grammatical errors ... I`ll try to get better at my English.